Here’s a Table of Contents of all of the Critique Technique posts to make it easier to go directly to the post you want to read.
Part 2: Series Overview
Part 3: How Do You Feel?
Beginnings and Endings
Part 5: Weak or Missing Hook
Part 6: The Wrong Beginning
Part 7: Scene and Chapter Endings
Part 8: Story Endings
Part 9: Characters and Conflict
Part 10: Poor Characterization
Part 11: Lack of Character Development
Part 13: Timing the Reveal
Part 14: Out-of-Character Behavior
Part 15: Unclear Character Goals
Part 16: Unclear or Insufficient Obstacles
Part 17: Dialect, Foreign Languages,...Read More